My friend and I
Ive got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. Im 11. Hes older than me. Hes 150 cm tall. Im 148 cm. Hes taller and stronger. Hes 43 kg and Im 41 kg. Hes heavier. Weve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basketball. Hes good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!
寫法:這篇作文的題目是我的朋友和我。既然寫作范圍是兩個人物,就要筆墨均勻,兩者缺一不可。不能只描寫朋友,也不能只敘述我。這無形中增加了寫作的難度。解決這個難點的關鍵是:找出兩個人幾方面的異同?梢酝ㄟ^常見的年齡、身高、體重、外貌、喜好等方面列舉出每個人的具體實際情況,再進行比較,通過比較突出每個人物的特點。這樣就把人物活靈活現(xiàn)的展現(xiàn)給讀者了。 時態(tài):像此類題目的作文,運用一般現(xiàn)在時即可。
句型:因為涉及兩個人的比較,不要忘記使用比較級句型:A+be+比較級+than+B。