下面是小編分享的高考英語(yǔ)真題作文評(píng)析，一起來(lái)看看吧。

　　【北京卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　第一節(jié)情景作文(20分)

　　美國(guó)中學(xué)生jeff將要來(lái)你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給Jeff寫(xiě)一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來(lái)中國(guó)后的生活安排。

　　注意：

　　1. 信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。

　　2.詞數(shù)不少于60。

　　Dear Jeff,

　　I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

　　While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

　　If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

　　Best wishes,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

　　這篇文章的特點(diǎn)還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據(jù)圖畫(huà)將文章的要點(diǎn)概括完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒(méi)有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當(dāng)，段落過(guò)渡自然，令人耳目一新。

　　【全國(guó)卷I】

　　【試題回放】

　　假定你是李華，正是英國(guó)牛津參加短期語(yǔ)言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃星期天去倫敦旅游�；ヂ�(lián)網(wǎng)上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。請(qǐng)給該旅行社發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。

　　注意：

　　1.詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已為你寫(xiě)好。

　　2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　3.參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費(fèi)用——fee

　　Dear Sir/Madame,

　　I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

　　As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

　　How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua