名師點(diǎn)評(píng)高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文(2)

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.

　　However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .

　　Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.

　　I’m eager to receive your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

　　本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應(yīng)用文，那么文章的意圖就要明確表示出來(lái)，本文在表達(dá)作者寫作意圖的時(shí)候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語(yǔ)從句，還采用了疑問(wèn)句，讓句式變化而不呆板。

　　【全國(guó)卷I】

　　【試題回放】

　　假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.個(gè)人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷 2.個(gè)人條件：英語(yǔ)好，愛(ài)好體育，善于交際，樂(lè)于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)

　　注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請(qǐng)—apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者—volunteer

　　Dear Sir / Madam:

　　I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

　　這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)以“我”為中心，詳細(xì)說(shuō)明了自己對(duì)志愿者工作的結(jié)合，以此來(lái)表達(dá)自己的決心。由于用詞恰當(dāng)，這種表現(xiàn)就比較充分，具備一定的說(shuō)服力。詞匯和語(yǔ)句的運(yùn)用也不錯(cuò)。

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