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題目：
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三(1)班的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，用�？坝⒄Z園地”寫一篇短文，記述你和同學(xué)們向?qū)W校提建議，解決自行車存放問題的過程。
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)不少于 60.
2. 短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
考點(diǎn)：考察看圖作文
寫作指導(dǎo)：
本文屬于看圖作文。敘述的是李華和同學(xué)們向?qū)W校建議解決自行車存放的問題。屬于記敘文，使用第一人稱和一般過去時(shí)。
要點(diǎn)：
1.在自行車存放處前面，我看見很多人都擁擠在一起;
2.找到幾個(gè)同學(xué)一起討論具體解決方法。
3.找到校長(zhǎng)提出建議;
4.校方采納建議，多開了一個(gè)進(jìn)出的門。
看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素。
【一句多譯】
在我們學(xué)校自行車存放處有一個(gè)長(zhǎng)久以來就存在的問題。
(1)There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school
(2)The parking place for bikes was an existing problem for a long time in our school。
【參考范文】
One possible version
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.