A Polluted Environment(污染的環(huán)境)

【要求】

世界環(huán)境日到來之際，你將代表你們班以一個(gè)污染的環(huán)境為題向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出一封倡儀書，先描述列舉環(huán)境污染對(duì)人類健康的危害，然后號(hào)召大家保護(hù)環(huán)境。

【范文】

A Polluted Environment

Environmental pollution is a serious social problem. It poses a terrible threat to men's health.

The atmosphere is filthy. The air is thick with dust and burnt oil. Dark smokes are being emitted from chimneys, and choking fumes are being released from numerous vehicles. Stay a little while in a big city, then wipe your forehead with your handkerchief, it is black. Hang out your washing on the line to dry, you will have to wash again. Garbage is left to accumulate in unsanitary heaps that attract flies and give off bad smell. Nor is the pollution confined to air and land. Large quantity of sewage and chemical waste are dumped daily into rivers, lakes and the sea, which kills millions of fish. Noises coming from honking cars, rumbling machines and broadcasting loudspeakers may make a person nervous and irritable, even drive him crazy.

Environmental pollution is responsible for many diseases that are disabling, or bringing death to human beings.

In short, let's take good care of our mother globe, not only for the well-being of ourselves, but also for that of our future generations.

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文是描寫文，以主觀描寫的方式，具體、形象地描繪了被污染的環(huán)境。文章突出強(qiáng)調(diào)了污染對(duì)人體健康有極大危害這一主題。語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練有力，句式總體上講也較簡(jiǎn)單，但有效地表達(dá)了倡議書所需的語(yǔ)氣。文章感染性強(qiáng)，特別是以祈使句作結(jié)，增強(qiáng)了本文的號(hào)召性。