「點(diǎn)評」大學(xué)英語六級參考作文范文高分版

　　上海新東方 靳萌

　　題目：

　　a letter declining a job offer

　　1. 對公司提供職位表示感

　　2解釋為何不能接受提供的職位

　　3希望諒解，并表示對公司的良祝愿

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I have received the letter from your corporation offering me the opportunity to work as an assistant manager. Thank you very much for your kind offer of this precious opportunity!

　　However, I have to say sorry for not being able to accept your offer. Shortly after applying for this position in your corporation, I received the admission letter from UCLA and was told this world-famous university would like to accept me as a graduate student in their Business School. After serious consideration, I have finally made the decision to go to the US first for my postgraduate study, which will absolutely promote my future career development .

　　So I would like to apologize that I have to decline your kind offer, but I believe that after my graduation, if I’m still lucky enough to get such great chance to work for you, I will definitely be a more capable team player in your corporation.

　　Finally, I love to offer my undying gratitude for all the efforts you have made in processing my application, and your kind understanding is highly appreciated.

　　Wish you a Happy New Year and wish your corporation even greater success in 2006!

　　With my best regards,

　　Jane

　　六級作文參考范文(11分版)

　　上海新東方 吳澤楊

　　下面，以05年12月六級作文為例，我們選用一篇11分段的現(xiàn)場文章，分析其特點(diǎn)。首先要指出的是，選用11分段的現(xiàn)場例文是因?yàn)椋瑢Υ蠖鄶?shù)考生來說，這個(gè)目標(biāo)更現(xiàn)實(shí)一些。

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　I am pleased with your offer of the position as a salesman. Thank you very much for your appreciation and kindness.

　　Unfortunately, I have to say sorry for this opportunity. Several reasons may account for my decision. Firstly, your company is far away from my home, which means that the cost for my traffic is likely to be greater than what I expected. Besides, as an experienced salesman, I wish very m

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